I don't want to feel the pain...
I can't stand it anymore...
I swear i'm not insane...
where is the door...
forgive me my lord...
In this poem the person needs help but he can't find any so
he commits suicide.suicide is a common issue in real life.
think before you act.
Wow, Julius I'm Impressed!!! :D This poem is very deep and thoughtful. I really loved it until where it sounded like you were trying to rush: "In this poem the person needs help..." Oh, and one more thing, ELABORATE!!!!
ReplyDeleteI think you need to elaborate on the issue of suicide. Did you do any research on it? Also, did you write this poem? I think it needs more substance.
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